‘Show, don’t tell’ is good advice, but sometimes you’re allowed to break the rules.
Writers are often taught that if you want a reader to feel something, you need to show it happening. A clenched fist instead of ‘he was angry.’ A lingering look instead of ‘she wanted him.’ A lingering look instead of ‘she wanted him.’ And it works, to a point.
But there a…
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