The Myth of Show Don’t Tell

And When You Should Tell

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Jul 03, 2025
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‘Show, don’t tell’ is good advice, but sometimes you’re allowed to break the rules.

Writers are often taught that if you want a reader to feel something, you need to show it happening. A clenched fist instead of ‘he was angry.’ A lingering look instead of ‘she wanted him.’ A lingering look instead of ‘she wanted him.’ And it works, to a point.

But there a…

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